Pages 30-47 have been added to Breakout from Bongolaan, which can also be found under the Studio Pages tab.
Along with the new pages, I've added a new feature: Soundtrack Interludes.
I collect soundtracks to the movies I love. While writing this story, I often daydream about the type of music that might fit each scene, as if it were a movie.
As for Chapter 2, AC/DC's Hell's Bells seemed most appropriate.
This feature is, of course, optional because the intention is to enhance, not detract, from the reader's enjoyment of the story.