tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6536986545417774233.post8832645717557399566..comments2023-11-15T19:39:55.958-08:00Comments on Stern Rake Studio: Pitch PerfectTed Henklehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09676165583937816802noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6536986545417774233.post-12134120826744217102012-08-02T14:06:53.433-07:002012-08-02T14:06:53.433-07:00Thank you very much Tara! The story is actually b...Thank you very much Tara! The story is actually based on a role-playing game I ran. The focus of the story will widen to include the 3chatacters introduced in Chapter Four. But as you mention, after taking Pam's class, I realized I needed a hard-hitting pitch/synopsis.Ted Henklehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09676165583937816802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6536986545417774233.post-43762519398181071242012-08-01T21:45:26.968-07:002012-08-01T21:45:26.968-07:00Really love your pitch for your story! I remember...Really love your pitch for your story! I remember you working on it from Pam's class and I think you've really nailed the emotional journey and the conflicts for the main character. As a mother, yes, I'm invested when I hear she must win custody of her son :) Great job!Tara Sheetshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16827865926020670022noreply@blogger.com